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Epic fantasy fiction with magic, mystery, horror and romance.
The General of Valendo #1
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Release date: November 30th, 2016
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Prince Cory’s inheritance is about to get him killed.
An enchanted sword, a world of warriors and magic, and a war without end are now his.

Cory and his grandfather, the legendary General of Valendo, initiate a diplomatic mission in an effort learn why the war began. Cory welcomes the princess of their old enemy into his stewardship. Despite her presence becoming more than diplomatic, the death of the old general heralds a new and insidious attack at the heart of Valendo. King Klonag of Nearhon thinks nothing of his niece, the princess, in the land he must conquer.

With the darkest of magic at work, the survival of the royal line and the souls of all in Cory’s Kingdom are at stake.

Can Cory take up his grandfather’s magic blade and become the new general Valendo so desperately needs?

The General’s Legacy – Part One: Inheritance is the first book in The General of Valendo gripping epic fantasy series that features lifelike characters, magic, romance, horror, and the pace and excitement of a thriller novel.

If you like your fantasy packed full of action and intrigue, to run a fast pace that refuses to let you put it down – without sacrificing the immersive experience of losing yourself in another world, then you’ll love The General’s Legacy.

Dive into the magical world of The General of Valendo series today!

An exceptional debut outing which fantasy fans should really know about.
James Tivendale – Fantasy Book Review

This book took me places – places of danger and bravery and mystery. The author’s voice is intriguing – at times, cold as evil; at times, lyric as an angel. All-round excellent read.
Alexander M Zoltai – author of Notes from an Alien

…most definitely entertaining and magical reading.
Dianne – Tome Tender

…just the ticket for those of us who love well-written fantasy with real people, rich settings, solid plot.
Kathy – morebooksthantime.com

 

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Epic fantasy fiction with magic, mystery, horror and romance.
The General of Valendo #2
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Release date: February 28th, 2017
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Dendra Castle is under siege by an army that never sleeps and time is running out.
Prince Cory resolves to lead a black operation right to King Klonag’s throne to do what was forbidden for his grandfather – end the reign of the Whiteland King.
To conquer a Kingdom, Cory leads just thirty Special Operators, the Silver Warrior, the Archmage of Valendo and his daughter with questionable battle magic ability and the Scout Commander who is rarely in sight.
Is it a desperate fool’s quest? Or has Zeivite truly come up with a plan to defeat Magnar and the ‘dead mage’ with his limitless magic?
Even Cory does not know.

One way or another, the decades-long war between Valendo and Nearhon must end. Klonag has more pieces to move in this game of war, and Princess Julia is one them. And if she does not cooperate? There are worse fates than death when dealing with Klonag and Magnar, and more than one way to ensure her… unfailing obedience.

The General’s Legacy – Part Two: Whiteland King is the second book in The General of Valendo series that concludes the enthralling story of The General’s Legacy. The stakes escalate, revelations come, and even the souls of the ancestors gather over the Whitelands to witness the epic conclusion that is sure to thrill.

If you want your fantasy action-packed, laced with mystery and running a pace that refuses to let you put it down – The General’s Legacy delivers.

Grab your copy of Whiteland King and start reading today!

Title revealed in the back of Whiteland King The General of Valendo #3
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Estimated release: Mid 2018
Working title: TBA The General of Valendo #4
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Estimated release: Late 2019
Working title: TBA  The General of Valendo #5
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Estimated release: Mid 2021
Working title: TBA The General of Valendo #6
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Estimated release: Early 2023

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7 reasons why we love fantasy fiction

… and what we want more of.

Those of us who love fantasy fiction get lost in what our imaginations conjure from the words we read. The train journey passes in but a moment. Our eyes droop as we set aside the book, too exhausted to read on into the night. Our families become widows and orphans to our reading.

In the summer of 2017, I asked members of my readers’ group 3 questions. Over 100 fantasy readers responded to these questions:

What do you love the most about fantasy fiction?

What else do you love about fantasy fiction?

What do you want to find more of in fantasy fiction?

The responses were a mix of the expected with some surprises. One surprise was the runaway success the number one reason most people give for their love of fantasy.
Here are the reasons in descending order. I could have used star ratings, but this is fantasy fiction so I’m ranking the responses on a dragon scale (excuse the accidental pun!) where 10 dragons is the highest.
Here is our dragon:

I’ve also included a couple of videos to this post for entertainment and interest 🙂

Here goes in reverse order on the dragon scale:

What do you love the most about fantasy fiction?

7. Quests – Adventure against the odds

We love heroic quests against the odds done by hero or heroine. It’s about triumph over adversity during an adventure. It’s do or die against insurmountable odds. In what other genre do mortals to take on the gods themselves?

6. Characters (villains and heroes)

Perhaps it is because, in the realms of the unbelievable that exists in fantasy fiction, there is a need for characters to be portrayed “realistically” and deeply. This applies even if they are a centaur, elf or dragon, to help readers suspend disbelief. Fantasy readers demand exotic worlds populated by equally exotic and diverse characters. They can flourish in this genre like no other. When characters are relatable, their faults can be forgiven. Readers want to root for the character. Personally, I don’t think that last point is specific to fantasy, more genre fiction in general, and we must be talking about the protagonist(s) here.
I like this next quote: “Anyone can write a fight between wizards, but how many make the reader care about who wins?”
It illustrates the desire to root for the hero very well.
The villains of fantasy are not forgotten here. Rendering the villain in words in all their glory as intricately as the hero is every bit as essential. What is the first character that comes to mind for Star Wars? I’m betting it’s not Luke Skywalker.

5. Dragons

“As soon as you put a dragon in a story, it’s a fantasy,” a reader once told me.
Dragons are the iconic creature of the fantasy genre. You would think that with so many stories out there featuring dragons our fantastical winged lizard friends would score more than 1.6 on the dragon scale and rank higher than 5. The story of dragons in this survey is not yet complete. There is a reason this survey had more questions. Read on dragon lovers…

4. Magic

Tastes vary among fantasy readers on this one. Some people want magic to be in the background, the way George R R Martin does it in his A Song Of Fire and Ice series. Others want magic to be something mysterious and unknown, the way J R R Tolkien does it with Gandalf. Some people want to know how magic works. What the rules are. This is how Brandon Sanderson portrays magic in the Mistborn series with “Allomancy” as an example. The term “Magic” could extend to superheroes and their powers and we can hardly ignore “The Force”. Almost no one needs telling where that comes from. When it comes to it, the powers or magic of the superhero is the defining dramatic concept of the superhero story itself.
However you like your magic, exploring characters with supernatural abilities making the impossible seem possible, and even fantasizing about having the same abilities yourself is all part of the charm of fantasy stories.

3. Imagination – No limits, anything can happen

Two words feature high here. “No limits.”
The only thing limiting what goes into a fantasy story is the imagination and creativity of the author and their ability to make the fantastic feel real and believable.
“Anything is possible.”
“Every restriction is lifted.”
“Make the impossible seem possible.”
“Only bound by rules the author invents.”
In fantasy, everything is bigger and grander. Authors are not limited by real world rules.
The message to fantasy authors is, go crazy, be inventive and don’t play safe.

2. World building, cultures, societies – other worlds

It could be a castle at the top of a beanstalk, a world made of water, a world similar to our own but full of surprises, heaven, some other plane of existence or a city suspended by chains over the pit of hell (that one has been done).
Whatever it is, it is the setting, the world building or “worlds unlike our own”. But the physical characteristics of the world on its own is not enough. Readers want to experience the culture and politics of the races that make up fantasy worlds.
The setting is a large part of the vicarious experience the fantasy reader is looking for. Readers want to leave behind the mundane world they already know and enter fully realized imaginary worlds brought to life in writing. Humans have a desire to explore places they have never been before and a fantasy fiction world is a place that desire can be satisfied. It’s about rediscovering that childhood sense of wonder at the world about us that we lose (or feel we lose) as adults.
Readers say they want a land that is exotic, magical and fascinating. Done well, the depth and richness of made up history and traditions can be breathtaking.

1. Escapism to another reality – immersion

Top of the dragon scale and the flyaway winner is escapism into previously unexplored and unknown worlds. It might be a little difficult to separate “escapism to another reality” from “world building” but survey respondents made this distinction when they answered the survey. The way I see it is an author could build an amazing world, but without a compelling story, and heroes and heroines to follow into this world we won’t experience escapism.

Finally, the worthy mentions for the most loved things in fantasy:
Fantastical creatures, potential complexity, storyline and time travel.

Readers want more than just one thing in their fantasy fiction (of course!) and we get a fascinating and different picture to the next question:

What else do you love about fantasy fiction?

Survey respondents were free to list multiple things here so there are more dragons awarded in most categories.

11. Duels and swordplay

OK, I get why duels and swordplay are not of the highest priority in fantasy fiction, but I’ve got a particular affection for them. And duels between wizards for that matter. Because I love them and this one from Princess Bride in particular, I’m going to share it here:

Normal service is now resumed 😉

10. Storylines and conflicts

As a fan of plotting and planning stories for drama I confess I’m a little disappointed conflict-filled storylines – the plot itself – does not feature more highly in the results. Perhaps because it’s like the air we breathe. We don’t think about the plot or notice it and we take it for granted until it is not there or bad.

9. Humour

Some of us want humour in our fantasy. I know I like a bit of humour to make characters feel real. Most authors will tell you characters come up with their own dialogue and decisions at times, and sometimes they are funny.

8. Quests – Adventure against the odds

Quests and adventures features a little higher in “other” things people love in fantasy.

7. Imagination – No limits, anything can happen

Ranked number 3 as the most loved aspect of fantasy it’s lower in the ranking here but remember people were free to state multiple “other” reasons for loving fantasy.

6. Escapism to another reality – immersion

For the few that did not mention this as their number 1 love of fantasy a great many included it as one of their other reasons.

5. Dragons

It’s not many peoples number 1 thing for fantasy but plenty of people mention it in their “other” list. But the story for dragons in this survey is not over yet. There is another question coming…

4. Characters (villains and heroes) and development

Another strong showing for well developed characters.

3. Fantastical creatures and races

Fantastical creatures that could still include dragons for some respondents has a strong showing here.

2. Magic

I love magic in fantasy and it seems most fantasy readers do too, even if it is not their first priority.

1. World building, cultures, societies – other worlds

For those that did not list this as their number 1 reason for loving fantasy the vast majority listed in “other” things. Fantasy authors, ignore great world building at your peril!

And the worthy mentions
Romance, heroics & heroes, time travel, epic battles, excitement, strong heroines, alternate history, portal fantasy, mythology, undead, happy ending, heroine rescue, fight evil, mysterious guides, character unsure of ability, varied perspective, thought-provoking, past/future opportunities, dark fantasy, modern times fantasy, flight by creature, absence of modern technology, clean language and no sex, good vs evil, angels, action, fairyland and character groups

So know we know what my readers’ group loves about fantasy, the next question is…

What do you want to find more of in fantasy fiction?
This is the kind of information authors are going to love – what are fantasy readers not getting enough of?
Here is the ranking in reverse order:

18. Longer series

17. Standalone books

16. Humour in dark moments

15. Witches

14. Beleivable character actions

13. Dwarves

12. Righteousness

11. Strong female characters

Particularily in the eBook market, women buy by far the most books – 75%+ of the market. Strong female characters are a big draw in the market right now. I’m a little surprised this did not feature higher in the rankings!

10. Good dragons

Wait for it… the dragon story is still not over…

9. Clean – no sex or bad language

8. Funny / crazy / happy

7. Original story with surprising twists

6. Strong character backstory / daily life

5. Elves

4. World building details – epic

3. Epic Adventure / Quests

2. Magic and Mages

Magic is a big part of what I like to write in my stories so I’m delighted to see fantasy readers want more magic!

1. Dragons

Dragons!
Dragons did not show strongly as the most loved or other things loved about fantasy but with 15% of respondents saying they want more dragons it ranks first in this list.
There will be dragons in future books from me in time. For now, check out the top 10 dragons from the movies:

Other things on the wanted list.
The remainder of the things mentioned come from only 1 or 2 people, but I don’t want to ignore anyone’s contribution so here is a list.
Women fighting dragons, conquering Kingsdoms etc
Compassion
Romance
Hidden Tolkien
Implied morality
Darker aspects
Names easy to pronounce
Surprise character deaths
Altruistic politicians
Portal fantasy
Fantastic creatures
Power from earth
Timeshifting
Different worlds and cultures
Scientific breakthrough
Related worlds
Continuing storylines
Dragon and human interaction
New worlds and technology
Conan the Barbarian
Strong heroes and heroines
Coming of age
Good endings
Relatable characters
Biblically based fantasy
Animal-human telepathy
Philosophy and metaphysics (nature of reality)
Balancing world building with telling the story
Bravery and loyalty
Flight
Blurry lines between good and evil
Human and intelligent animal interaction
Prequels with more character development
Chivalry
Dungeons and Dragons stories
Dragons as main characters
Paranormal romance
Dark dungeons
Not a Tolkien copy
Less poor rising against rich baddies
Swords and sorcery bladesinger style
Creative creatures – pizza dragon (Eh?)
Get lost in another world and forget ours
Tight knit groups
Mythical Beings
Urban fantasy

Conclusion
Away from a few key features of fantasy fiction there is a lot of diversity in the loves and wants from readers. Authors have their work cut out keeping their audience happy!

I would like to thank all the members of my readers’ group who took the time to take this survey. If you would like to join my readers’ group click the Freebie & Newsletter menu option on this website above.

If there is anything my readers’ group missed that you want to share please tell us the comments section below.

Happy reading!

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